How to Write a LinkedIn About Section (Without Sounding Like a Resume)

A mid-career professional rewriting their LinkedIn About section as a positioning statement rather than a resume summary, why most About sections fail, the four parts that work, what shows before the see more fold, first person or third person, what to leave out, a worked before-and-after example, and the four mistakes

How to write a LinkedIn About section is the question almost nobody asks, and it is the one section of your profile where you get to speak in full sentences. Most people use it to restate their history in the third person - a resume with worse formatting and a friendlier font. That is a wasted asset, because the About section is the only part of your profile a stranger reads voluntarily.

Here is the reframe: the About section is not a summary of where you have been. It is a positioning statement - who you help, with what, and what you want next - written so a stranger can decide in ten seconds whether to keep reading.

What follows is the whole method: why most About sections fail, the four parts that work, what shows before the fold, the first-person question, what to leave out, a worked example, and the four mistakes.

Why most About sections fail

Three failures, and they are all about the reader rather than the writer.

It opens with a job title, so the reader has to translate it before they can care.
It lists responsibilities instead of outcomes, so nothing is memorable.
It has no ask, so a reader who is interested has nothing to do next.

The fix is not more personality. It is a clearer job for the section: help one kind of reader decide whether to contact you.

The four parts

Four short parts, in this order. The whole thing should run to about a hundred and fifty to two hundred and fifty words.

Part	What it does	Length
The hook line	Names the work you do and who you do it for	One sentence
The proof	Two or three outcomes with a number, a scale or a deadline	Two or three sentences
The range	The adjacent problems you can also handle	One or two sentences
The ask	What you want next, and how to reach you	One sentence

The hook line is the one people get wrong. "Experienced operations professional" is a category, not a hook. "I help distribution teams cut the gap between what they forecast and what they ship" is a hook - it names a reader and a problem in one line.

The first three lines are the whole first impression

LinkedIn shows roughly the first three lines before the reader has to click "see more". Treat those three lines as the entire section for anyone who is skimming - which is most people.

Line one: the hook. Who you help and with what.
Line two: the strongest proof point, with a number or a deadline.
Line three: the thing you want next.

If those three lines work on their own, the rest of the section is a bonus rather than a requirement.

First person or third person?

First person. The third person reads as a press release and it makes the reader do the work of imagining a person. "I lead a team of six" is warmer and shorter than "a results-driven leader with a team of six". Write it the way you would say it to someone at a conference, then tighten it.

What to leave out

The About section is not the place for everything. Leave out the list of every tool you have touched, the phrase "seeking new opportunities" on its own, and any adjective that could describe a thousand other people. If a sentence would survive being pasted into someone else's profile, it is not doing any work in yours.

A worked example

Before: "Experienced marketing professional with over ten years of experience in digital marketing, content strategy, and brand management. Skilled in SEO, analytics, and cross-functional collaboration. Seeking new opportunities."

After: "I help software teams turn a thin content library into a pipeline they can forecast. Last year I rebuilt a twelve-person team's publishing process and cut the time from idea to live post from three weeks to four days. I also handle the unglamorous half - the brief, the calendar, and the measurement that tells you which posts actually earned their keep. If you are hiring for content that has to show a number, message me."

Same person, same experience. The second one names a reader, shows an outcome, and gives them something to do.

The four mistakes

Mistake	What it looks like	The fix
Opening with a title	"Experienced professional with..."	Open with who you help and with what
Third person	"A results-driven leader who..."	Write it in the first person
Responsibilities, not outcomes	"Responsible for content strategy"	Name the outcome and the scale
No ask	Ending on a summary of your skills	End with what you want next

The About section checklist

Four parts, three lines that carry it alone.

My first line names who I help and with what?
My first line avoids a job title as the opener?
I have two or three outcomes with a number, a scale or a deadline?
I have named the adjacent problems I can also handle?
I have one sentence on what I want next?
The first three lines work on their own before see more?
It is written in the first person?
It runs to roughly a hundred and fifty to two hundred and fifty words?
I have cut the list of every tool I have touched?
I have cut seeking new opportunities as a standalone line?
I have cut any adjective that could describe anyone?
I have read it out loud once?

What each part does

The section has one job: help a stranger decide whether to contact you.

Part	Job it does	If it is missing
Hook line	Names the reader and the problem	They have to translate a job title
Proof	Makes you memorable	Nothing to repeat internally
Range	Shows the adjacent problems	You look narrow
The ask	Gives them a next step	An interested reader has nothing to do

The close

Your About section is a positioning statement, not a biography. Name the reader, show one outcome, and say what you want next - in the first three lines. That is the whole method, and it takes twenty minutes. If you are rebuilding the rest of the profile, the headline method is the same craft in one line, and the outreach message templates are what to send once the profile is ready.

Quick answers

Short answers to the questions this piece gets asked most.

What should I write in my LinkedIn About section?
Four parts in order: a hook line naming who you help and with what, two or three outcomes with a number or a deadline, the adjacent problems you can also handle, and one sentence on what you want next. About a hundred and fifty to two hundred and fifty words in total.

Should the LinkedIn About section be first person or third person?
First person. The third person reads as a press release and makes the reader translate it into a person. Write it the way you would say it to someone at a conference, then tighten it until every sentence is doing work.

How long should my LinkedIn About section be?
Long enough to cover the four parts and short enough that the first three lines carry it alone. Only the first three lines show before the reader has to click see more, so treat those three as the whole section for anyone who is skimming.

What should I leave out of my LinkedIn About section?
The list of every tool you have touched, the phrase seeking new opportunities on its own, and any adjective that could describe a thousand other people. If a sentence would survive being pasted into someone else profile, it is not doing any work in yours.

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